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Who you are

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Autumn: me
She was bullied when she was younger so she doesn't talk much and what happened after... thats a story for another time

No shading.
Art: Me

This was a quick drawing.
I drew this out on Paint first then I edited on SAI. It's not that good but what ever.. AND I forgot ears D:.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Critiquification time! Okay. Here we go. I think that when you shade, you might want to go a little darker, since the shading you have now isn't very noticeable, and since the entire scene seems dark, you might want that to be reflected in the character as well. Putting the sclera (whites of the eyes) in is always a good idea. The other thing I would recommend is making her shoulders the same length, and her neck could probably be a little thinner. I understand that this is just a quick doodle, but you asked for a critique, so here one is. You are improving, by the way.